Revised SlideShow

So after I uploaded my previous slideshow I received another critique from Julie Peterson. She suggested that while my slides were consistent the technique I used in editing my photos wasn’t and should be. So I found new images and removed the background on all of them.

I also moved the small flower as she suggested in an attempt to make it more along with the focal point and not a tangent. Hopefully this revised show is even better than the first.

Lastly, I altered my Font and changed it to High Tower Text

New Images:
Golden ticket




About MPalmatier

I am a mother, wife, business owner and part-time college student.
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2 Responses to Revised SlideShow

  1. mandee grant says:

    Great job, Michelle!


  2. bro78001 says:

    I think you did a wonderful job Michelle! I really love the color scheme. The text goes well with your message. The little flowers look so much better. This presentation flows right and feels more unified. Great Job! Here is the link to mine: . I hope you enjoy it!
    Susan Ruske


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